Originally Posted by John Voorpostel
No Dom...I loved the hook, it drew me in, I think you wasted it though...but I accept you have a version you like...that's where it ends with me

And any version I might do\try would simply be different, not better or worse

I gave you a litany of reasons why it works, you still disagree.

I should be given credit for a good hook, a tight flowing lyric, with not akot of space to do it in.

Melding perfectly into a bkues structure, which you couldn't do if you didn't understand blues

Adhering to blues tradition while still putting slightly different stamp on it.

I dont think your version could achieve this.

And be entertaining at the same time.

Do it, and use same amount of words

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 06/01/26 10:06 PM.