Originally Posted by John Voorpostel
LOL theoretical hits are the best Dom

Does work ...like the "clipped lines" that make for a lyric that scan well....but IMO overall it needs something more

Can't help you myself, but get some "producer type" buddies to listen ..

Something more like the second chorus, a bridge and an ending?

Its not done lol

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