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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/31/26 09:46 AM
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Posts: 9,092 Likes: 97
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I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams "Fully Formed...?" I think you jumped the gun a bit, Dom... Jut like Rob lol. "A rubber breed...? Lol, that's gotta' go. "Elastic heart dreams..." you went for a rhyme instead of continuity... "Stretch to infidelity" is good, but the rest is crap. And, as usual, in your arrogance, you went straight to AI with your own thread. Seriously, Dom... what are you thinking? I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams "Fully Formed...?" I think you jumped the gun a bit, Dom... Jut like Rob lol. "A rubber breed...? Lol, that's gotta' go. "Elastic heart dreams..." you went for a rhyme instead of continuity... "Stretch to infidelity" is good, but the rest is crap. And, as usual, in your arrogance, you went straight to AI with your own thread. Seriously, Dom... what are you thinking? I disagree, its good pop material. I think elastic hearts is a phenomenal hook I like rubber breed. How is it arrogant starting a song thread. When I see your other reviews, you are so full of crap, nobody could take you seriously..
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 03/25/26 04:30 AM.
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