Originally Posted by David Gill
I'm blocked and stuck and can't seem to get out of this rut I'm in.
No inspiration. No joy. No sun.
It's cold here in Buffalo and only getting colder.

I was told that in these moments………….

Peace,

Dave

I like the directness of your preamble, (the above quote) and thought, this is going to be good. Could you do something with that first part ??

So try something like this. From the word, moments…..think of a title hook……like

Hold on, Hold on, Hold on, Hold on.

Next, establish a basic rhythm w that hook.
Then, go back and re-write the preamble to this rhythm.

You then will have first verse and a short chorus
And a rhythm.

I will do music for that minimal, and post here in jumpshare player. Yes? No?
Bill

Last edited by Bill Draper; 01/19/26 04:19 PM. Reason: Added to chorus, to make 4/4 beat