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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,297 Likes: 175
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I've seen this before...
Lyrically, there's a good rhythm in your verses, and the music fits.
But your "hook" (lalas) get cluttered and over complicated.
Landing on "Looking for love" works!
Good energy as usual
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