Originally Posted by Kay-lynn Carew
Who is singing this? It sounds like a 45 record and the battery is running down (?)

Some good lines here, could use a little focus cus nobody likes to be lectured to, but that's just me.

Maybe you could make it First person.. and say I'm gonna smash my computer and I"m gonna etc etc.


Why you talking about his song ? it has nothing to do with mine


We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.