Thank you so much for taking a stab at this

I like the sparsity of words here getting the picture across Kay-lynn. You and Bob can both bring that out nicely

wrt music, I like what Elvis put up last....closest to what I thinking...yours is fun ...and has that great opening...have a take in mind for the video...it can open with the classic "Take me out to the ballgame" melody line which I have to think had a CC license version somewhere....

so let me take another stab using that idea...but I have no issue really with naming the animals playing because of the video...

Oh and do yourself a favour. Go to the other place to listen to Couch's Desdemona Motel....


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop