Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
Before I clicked on it, I knew that it would be a good. Your songs always are.

This is Beautiful.
When the singer sings the title, the passion and innocence is very moving.

My only suggestion:

IMO, the verses are so lovely and moving that they overshadow the lyrics in the chorus, which seem a bit predictable.
That's one person's impression. That aside.

Beautiful song. Love the innocence.

Marty

Though Dave, you arent supposed to clutter this section with beautiful songs. wink


Thank you, Marty for the read, the listen, your kind words and suggs. I truly appreciate your time and input. I can't help but being a lover of love and wanting to share it with my JPF fam.
I'll try to be better, but I make no promises. smile


Peace,

Dave


"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"