when they can’t pay . what the funeral ?. I read the song lyrics . You should not have to explain the story first . I should get from the lyrics , see if it all makes sense . I kinda get it but lost me in a few places. Publishers say push play , they don't want hear an explanation . If they get in by v1 and chorus , it's back to their office for v2 . I think once you hone it in more , you'll have a touching story and make publishers cry


its just a opinion

Last edited by bennash; 12/30/25 05:59 PM.

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