Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Mind you, as you say this is complete satire, i don't subscribe to most political points

Fdem,
I wrote the following above: "this is a sharp, satirical lyric with a strong political edge and a clear voice. The concept—mock-praising while exposing hypocrisy—is clever and biting."
You don't have to remind me what I wrote. What's wrong with you guys?
I made a few suggestions. If you like them use them. Saying "Your suggestions may work depending on how it sounds in the end" sounds like you don't have a clue.