Originally Posted by Rob B.
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
It's about me, and one more try, now whooooo could think of those?

Well, One More Try was a huge hit for George Michael. I wasn't the first person to write a song with that title. What''s wrong with One More Try? At least people don't need an urban dictionary to understand what the song is about.


It's boring , and George Michael was a world famous artist who could release any song and get heard

You are a schmuck on a forum , how could you stand out with that? Let alone the melody and rest of lyric

There's nothing wrong with writing as a hobby, but when you look fur a fight chances are you'll get one

And you'll lose

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 05/22/24 03:05 PM.