Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
I like "Just Another Errand"

It doesnt pretend to be too much. 2 people viewing the final moments of the same broken romantic relationship with very contrasting points of view.
One with utter indifference. One with much pain and hurt. Fade to black.

Nothing groundbreaking, but relatable. Happens every day. Been on both sides of it in my life....35+ years ago.
I have a theory as to why it has no resonance with you.

I think that it is a pretty good writing. I have seen nothing in anything that you have ever posted that I would consider superior.
Just your claims of such. But that looks like a syndrome.
But you don't know the difference.

You think adding toontrack to your song makes it s better song .

Oh you are talking ground breaking .

I have never thought of myself as ground breaking, in fact few artists are. I struggle to write a good song. Not easy.

but what you write .... And your judging me?

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 05/21/24 11:30 AM.