Ok, but i think the pre chorus is good, the verses I dono

What's a I’m a cauldron of emotion.
An explosion of rage.



I know what your trying to say, but instead of saying that, whats going on that he's.....

In a caudrin of emotion. Fancy words

It's yours, just trying to offer my opinion

But as they say, opinions are like what, and we all have one

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