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ASCAP & AI
by Brian Austin Whitney - 07/09/26 08:22 PM
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OCCIO
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Of Virtue
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I like what you’ve done, so far, but I also think you’ve got a better chorus lyric inside you than what I’m reading. You might want to go to the first person singular and tell us why you love your country and only use my country in the last line as you have now. I’d like to see a more dynamic chorus as well and IMO it needs bridge....it’s a really good rallying song but IMO doesn’t have that feel just yet...has great potential
Just some thoughts
Steve
Last edited by VNORTH2; 10/07/23 11:55 AM.
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