Hey Carroll,
I'm glad you like this one. You and I weren't collaborating back then, lol. At first I thought the lines were too long but once I sang them on top of the music I noticed that they work quite well. Writing lyrics is not really what I enjoy doing. It took me almost 2 weeks to finish these lines. They had to flow well with the vocal melody that I came up with. I appreciate your feedback.

Take care - Robert