Originally Posted by Michael Zaneski
Steve,

Thanks for the additional background into how you got the title line and all.

Indeed, we just have to look at what's happening in various States to know racism is still a big problem.

I was actually rooting for the structure to keep moving forward (on to D, E, F, etc...) --you hear that sometimes in modern operatic form but never in popular music. It can really keep a listener "in the moment" but perhaps at the expense of giving that same listener little anchoring.

Mike


I love trying things as you suggested here with structure...to just move away from the expected format...and have done a couple of songs along those lines. The trick/challenge is to keep the listener interested...I wrote and recorded a song with 2 lines...and the length was 7 minutes...it seemed to work...I will post it at JPF in a bit...the response from one person was .."that's the fastest 7 minute song I've ever heard" LOL

Steve


Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald