Bridge gets a tad poectic for country , alot of good stuff in this , shorten that v2 like Aldean to get to chorus quicker . Not sure on a female singer

Did you look at the Bible in the drawer, There in the drawers in motels I think
My heart can't forgive the abandon. maybe abandon might be to formal for country , I thought of that rhyme too
Your a broken commandment.

That works

I could've loved you forever
Just like the preacher said

Last edited by bennash; 08/02/23 03:49 PM.

We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.