Michael,

I really liked the vibe of this music. Vocals have a sweet tone but I do agree with a lot of what Gary said about the gal could in places emphasize key words a bit more.

I'm also in agreement (with pop music) today that long intros are not an advantage as listeners want a song to get going a bit faster--that's just the world's nature. I find myself moving/using my mouse to skip long intros at times out of impatience--not a good thing really, but a truism. Having said this, I do like intros, but for launching a song, but not being such an entity unto itself. Yes there are famous intros with pop/rock songs, but they usually classics that we know what is coming therefore impatience is superseded by anticipation! I will also grant you there still are folks that dig long intros, and you may be one and its NOT a bad thing at all, but just something for consideration when you're trying to get a new song listened to.

Nice production & vocals for sure--I enjoyed this song and would be one that I could listen to often!

steady-eddie