Perry your son has a wonderful imagination and can clearly articulate that tumultuous vision of a city on the brink and some zombie apocalypse....as it is happening ...in a vividly descriptive way

That closing line is as stellar a closer as I have read and I love to read.

How old is he? My wife is a paediatrician, well retired now, but her specialty was developmental so a lot of what she dealt with was early diagnosis of children on the spectrum


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop