Yes, but you are assuming the lyric has emotion in it, lol and, if you are going to critique somebody else as being bad, dont suck yourself.

Subjective input is all worthwhile, but this lyric was about as bad as it gets, i had to go to my thread and ask...was this the guy who said my lyric was weak...it was.

Ill give you an example, the thread is probably still here somewhere from moons ago.

But the other site, the admin there and I had butt heads every day. I still email with some of them folks, and some of them know me.

But I came here, posted a song it had the word "baby" in it. "Oh it sounds like a good track, but too many cliches....One that I counted, baby. And so he followed suit by making seem like I had to redo everything, and change lyrics, just to appease him.

Sometime shortly after, I was reading another critique of his, telling the person who great it was "and as usual, your lyrics are great" Well, they used the word BABY, several times, and the lyric was not well thought out, had no hook,. Well, I wasnt as mature I am now ahemm, so I went into that thread and let em have it. I was getting emails from folks on both sites cracking up, and they were posting the ramblings on the other site... I lost it for sure...

it has nothing to do with being moved by one artist and not the other. The critique was specfic, called out for having a cliche baby in it, when this one had baby four times as well as I love you, and that kind of stuff.

it HAPPENS. What i mean by critiquing the person, is if baby is a cliche, its a cliche for everybody, not just me.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 02/27/21 08:23 PM.