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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by les_paul_gurl:
I just wrote this one. Another one about Jesus....</font>


I really liked your lyrics there was really one week line I saw, the "Even taught us how to give", I know you're goin for a rhyme scheme, but don't make quite so obvious, -maybe you could replace it with somethin that almost rhymes but has more depth and meaning like " You redeemed us from our sins"
or "Your the solid rock of our strength" or somethin like that