Vic,

Killer tune . . . killer vocal. And stellar production as always—crisp, clean, magnetic. There are a couple of things I might have opted for, but it’s totally artistic preference, subjective things:

One, I would have liked a bit more grit musically in the chorus—a little more rock, maybe a deep, bassy type electric guitar going underneath.

And then, lyrically, the “better for the children” in the bridge was a bit of a curveball for me—just unexpected and for me a bit disconnected. But again, that’s a subjective thing, so maybe not even worth noting.

But it’s a great, great tune, Vic. Your songs are always top notch, and, with no disrespect to what’s come before, this is among my favorites from you.

Enjoyed it immensely!

Best regards,

Deej