Well.........I really like the lyric content here and the performance is on point. I liked the lyric so much that I almost wanted to not listen and come up with music for it.......maybe send it to you and see what you thought.....but, I broke down and listened and can tell you I'm not even gonna try doing better than what I just heard. I do feel as though a few lines were a bit squeezed for time, but man.....nicely done all around.