The Bridge sounds a lot like the Verse. The function of a Bridge is to renew listener interest, to Re-Hook them, with variation, Change. You might consider altering the Rhythm and Melody of the Bridge to serve that function. The flute sounds like it goes its own way, not closely relevant to the vocal Rhythm or Melody.


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