Hey Ironknee, didn't see your reply sooner.

Thanks for listening. As far as lyrics, there is not alot you can do lyrically with this the way it's structured.

You have to cram the lyric in with the short bursts of melody, all u can do is have a hook and some lines, nice title.... i think it's enough, but I'm not claiming greatness on these lyrics, it was more about the sound of e words, and making it fit the melody.

Sometimes when I write a lyric, the problem becomes, making the song singable and memorable , because when you write your lyric first, it's not musical. Here I had the track and a hook, and then filled in the rest.

Becomes a trade off, if u want a catchy pop song, your not gonna get much lyric to work with.

I think it's a pretty good song overall, I can and have done better.

But thx for taking the time out for a spin and a comment.


Last edited by Fdemetrio; 06/16/18 11:16 PM.