Originally Posted by RainyDayMan
That's terrific! Really enjoyed it. Innocent an joyful.
Really liked the internal rhymes such as: Loafing over fresh cut clover, chewing blades of grass
and of course the melody in the refrain.
Very very nice smile


Thanks - I sweated over those internal rhymes.

First draft of the lyric was done in a couple of hours.

Took several days of working the lyrics while driving to and from work (hour commute) to get those rhymes and still say what I wanted. smile

Scott