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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,419 Likes: 4
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Ricki,
This is a beautiful tune. I don't have a fine enough ear to comment on production--but it sure sounds fine to me as is. I'm mixed regarding Neil's comment about dropping the "waiting", "just" and "fading" before "outside Cleveland." A part of me wants to drop it from a structural perspective--to keep it uniformly just "outside Cleveland" gives it some symmetry. But then I like the extra syllables on a few of the lines. So, go with what feels good. Or better yet, go with what sounds good. And this is sounding pretty awesome to me. Great job!
All the best,
Deej
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