Hi Gavin,

I started out fully engaged and like it overall but observed my attention drifting and thought (at that point) that there's too much here and that a little preening would help out a lot.

I think maybe, though, you were going for it to be a comedic effect from the barrage of questions?

I remember in Napoleon Bonapart's "They're Coming To Take Me Away' (I was a big Doctor Demento fan) that they raise the pitch of his vocal (while he does his main rant) so it sounds cartoon-ish by the end and thought, maybe you could have fun with this song in a like manner. I was imagining the tempo constantly increasing until it was practically unmanagable towards the end. You could try that with the overall finished file but that would do the Napoleon Bonapart thing to you vocals. If you kept increasing the tempo in BIAB it would sound like YOU all the way through, and could be pretty funny cuz you would sound more and more harried and manically inquisitive as you sang through the material.. And if you did that, I'd recommend keeping ALL the words.

Just some random thoughts on the breadth one is allowed when producing novelty tunes..I've done my share, LOL..

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 11/27/17 05:13 PM.
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