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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hard-Fi
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Interesting tune. I like some of the elements you got going.
The 'slice and dice' you do is cool and all, but you are halting momentum too much in the tune. I would play some of the slicey dicey stuff off against other stuff that keeps going. This will give you the modern slice and dice but keep the momentum moving forward.
I can clearly hear some of the edits as well. You may wanna try and make these a bit less obvious.
I would also interpose more lyrics in between the repetitive parts such as "I wanna be loved" to make the hook stand out more.
Peace,
TC
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