Hey Nelson!

What a fabulous write here! Lyrically really strong my friend, and you have a Dylanesk/Chapin combination vibe going on--but that's kind of "you" when you think about that. I think any songwriter that has a "little" going on with some of the great writers/performers is following a pretty good formula! Nice performance as well, and great melody.

One possible arrangement sug should you re-visit that area--(not a nit). I'd like to hear you leave the harmony out of the 1st chorus and keep it for the last two, which in my mind, may enhance the song's "build" and even empower the chorus the 2nd time around. Not sure........just food for thought--use, try, or lose. Super write my friend!

steady-eddie.