Hi Lisa!

I like this a lot. The only thing that bothered me was calling the finish of the painting a chore...... so I would probably would try something like

"Two summers later, partly hidden in a drawer
He discovered the painting and held it once more"

Also, I put a photo of Roscoe on my reverbnation page... tell me what you think.... I can't beleive what a goofball he is!!

Last edited by iggyiggy; 11/15/14 01:05 AM.