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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 11:28 AM
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Love Bomb
by Michael W. Brown - 10/10/26 08:09 PM
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I started writing this one while attempting the excercise in Mr. Blume's article. It didn't work so well, but here's what I've come up with.
Drinking Dark Whiskey
V1
Sitting at this old bar
Thinking about time
Drinking dark whiskey
Sipping white wine
Chorus:
You’re like the one I always wanted
Never thought I’d find
But I see you clearly
By way of white wine
I wish I could go back
Back into time
To the day that I held you
Back when you were mine
V2
I don’t doubt that you hate me
Guess I drink too much
For your wishful thinking
I miss your touch
(Repeat Chorus)
V3
Sitting at this old bar
Thinking about time
Drinking dark whiskey
Sipping white wine
(Repeat Chorus)
Copyright © 2004 Nick Holbrook (BMI)
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Nick
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