Hi Pam,

Thanks for letting me know that those lines were vague and made you wonder who was speaking or who is to blame. My intention with the bridge was that this is where she expresses anger because he has died. Musically, I do this, but I think the first two lines of the bridge may be distracting. How is this to correct that?

"You said farewell to war and all that pain
The telegram they sent left me standing in the rain"

As I was thinking about changing this, it struck me that I have covered all the stages of grief here except maybe bargaining.

Again, thanks for the feedback.

Vondelle

Vondelle Hebert

http://cdbaby.com/cd/vondelle