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This is really pretty, Tammy, with some gorgeous chord changes. And I love your vocal and Ian's piano.
The "turn me on" part also stuck out at me a little. Also, these lines:
There's never been a breath that I would ever want to hold
Than swimming deep into your depths to quench my lonely soul
Seems like "ever" should be replaced with something like "more" - though it wouldn't sing as well.
Very close, imo. I think it's good to work that fast and get 99% of it - but then spend a little time fine-tuning. Is definitely worth the effort here.
Scott
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