I envy you two in being able to write such a touching love song. I can only manage to write odd obscure stuff, so bravo for that alone.

I think the music fits really well with the lyric. I also think Tammy sounds really nice on this.

If there was anything that stood out for me it was the line: "you will always turn me on" in the bridge. The rest of the lyric is very poetic and romantic and it seems like something else should be said there. Maybe I'm the only person in the universe who would hone-in on this, so take it with a grain of salt.

It's a very nice song. Good work!

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You think I'm just another jive folk singer but I'm a master in the art of criminology..Tom Russell