Hi Blue boy!

Well I guess something was missing (cause I missed this one completely blush ). I like it sort of sweet simple and poetic. Not sure why you ran out of room, but it certainly was enough for what it was. My only complaint might be all the simple ryhmes, but I am guilty of those as well. Great job and thanks for sharing.
Derek
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Last edited by Derek Hines; 07/06/08 01:55 PM.

All the worlds a song and all the people Singers

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