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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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Glen this is truly lovely! Very radio friendly. Great imagery. I did get lost on verse 2 and had to read it over and over. Could be I'm just slow tonight. In the line: But baby thought we're by ourselves It seems as if the WE is referring to the singer and the whipporwill? Seems unlikely that is what you intended. Probably just some minor re-wording could clear up. I really like the whipporwill image. Keep it but just don't devote so many lines to that bird! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif)
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