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Glen: Definitely a Lonestar-ish kind of song. Coupla nits. In the chorus, "near or far" seemed a bit predictable. And "even though our bodies may be miles apart" - I don't know. Something about the word "bodies" there isn't working for me. Sounds too clinical or something. V2 didn't add enough to the story, IMO. Oops, that was 3 nits, not a couple. False advertising. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) Sorry. Hope some of it helps. Ricki
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