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Vic,
I think it's a great folk tune . . . terrific write by the two of you. Catchy melody on that chorus. From a production standpoint, the accordion jumps out a little too much for me in spots distracting form the vocal. I might think about dialing that down just a tad--but that's a pretty nitty suggestion. The production is really solid all the way through regardless. I really like the way you move to spoken word in that third verse--very nice touch there.
Very cool tune, gents. Good luck pitching it--they'd be nuts to pass, IMHO.
(BTW, 6 years ago was before my time here, so I don't think I ever heard the original, but I can't imaging this at a slower tempo--this is just perfect for me).
My best to you,
Deej
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