Hey Gavin,

There is a lot of incredibly funny stuff in this song. I can see this as being a favorite at bars.

smile

The one line about the boy being drowned kinda threw me though. It felt sort of out place in the comic scheme.


I actually think the songs starts winding down after this..


...when….did time start?
Tell me what happens… after it stops
Tell me what lies beyond the edge of space
Tell me who…..made God

And if he made man in his own image
Tell me who made Donald Trump
Tell me why… are your fingers in your ears?
Tell me why….are you crying?

CHORUS
So much that’s a mystery, mister
So much that’s crazy as hell
You look like you’re pretty smart, sister
Hey can you tell…


[Na na na na, na na na na]

tell me what's on the edge of space

tell me what is happening to the human race....

slow fade.....


????

Just a thought.


David Snyder, Composer, Author
Singer-Songwriter, Producer
Regional Chapter Coordinator, NSAI
www.davidsnydermusic.com
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