Gavin,

I like the sound of this and the idea behind it; really inviting, fun tune, and nice production supporting this. I do think the lyrics can use a bit more focus; there’s a lot of good here (more than a lot, actually) but, well, for me at least, it falls into stream of consciousness at points, particularly at the end. BTW, love the sax in the background—awesome and a total keeper (Is that you playing?). Hope the comments help.

Best regards,

Deej