Nelson,

I loved the concept and as always, dig your special heartfelt unique vocal style which is "just you." I think this is a great demo in the sense that "yes" with little imagination, a sophisticated "orchestral" production could do a lot to give the song the "music build" as Mike Z suggested and would enhance this song which I agree--which in turn would keep the lay listener riveted given the song length. I have one I'm working on with about the same length--in which I'm addressing that very thing. I like the idea of having a unique long song on an album.

But my friend, you are such a talent, and I can always listen from beginning to end with your songs! My favorite thing about these lyrics are the "corollary" in which you so aptly develop here--really cool!

steady-eddie