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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/25/24 01:36 AM
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This is scratch recording new version of "Let The Rain Carry Me To You" when listening please keep in mind this is written for a female singer and If you happen to know a female singer with a voice that could possibly fit this song please contact me a.s.a.p. http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9808574Let the Rain Carry Me to You By Cassie Rae Smith and James Craig Smith ©2010 Let the rain carry me to you This chili haze is nothing compared to the space that lays That lays between us Clouds are rolling These skies are dark and gray With every gust of wind I ‘m closer to you every day baby Baby I can’t wait Chorus 1 Till I move with the clouds and drop Like sugar from the sky I’ll Land on your lips and taste like candy You won’t know why you’ll Think bout’ how my love so sweet so far away can be yah You’ll think bout’ how my love so sweet so far away can be yah Let the rain Oh let the rain Let the rain Oh let the rain Carry me to you WARM AIR IS RISING DEW DROPS gather on my WINDOW PANE I draw heart shapes on THE GLASS I can’t get to you to fast baby Ill be with you at last Chorus 2 Cause I’ll move with the clouds and drop Like sugar from the sky I’ll Land on your lips and taste like candy You won’t know why you’ll Think bout’ how my love so sweet so far away can be yah You’ll think bout’ how my love so sweet so far away can be yah Let the rain Oh let the rain Let the rain Oh let the rain Carry me to you Let the rain Oh let the rain Let the rain Oh let the rain Carry me to you End
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Hi Jimmy, I like this I think it sounds good the way it is. Dottie
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Hi Jimmy. You've got some cool lines in here, but the 2nd verse is so much shorter than the first. Is there any reason why you did that?
Also, I think the chorus could be shortened down a bit by taking out some of the "Oh Let the Rain" refrains.
I like the feel of this song though. Good luck with it.
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Carlos Tabora Songwriter/Pianist
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Some things to consider..thanks for the listen.
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Heather Cowles can sing just about anything and she sings alot of my songs..she's on my soundclick....and she's from JPF's if you need her info let me know ..glyn
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