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The Never Ending Fire / written by Andrew Shields
There’s Something Aching Inside My Chest Feel’s Like The Fire’s Been Put To Rest I May Not Know Much But This I Do All This Pain I Feel Was Caused By You
And In That Mess I Call My Head Thoughts Of You Make Me Wish I Was Dead It’s Just That Image Of You With Him Didn’t Anyone Tell You That Cheating’s A Sin
I’m Fed Up Trying To Ignore What You Done When I First Met You I Thought You Were The One But Now I Wish I Could Turn Back Time To Make Sure That You Were Never Mine Cause You Reached Inside And Pulled My Heart Out My Chest Tore It In Two And Put The Fire To Rest
So I Just Act Like It Wasn’t Meant To Be And Jump Start The Fire That Was In Me Fingers Crossed And Hoping Like Hell That This Spark Of Life Will Keep Me Well
So As My Heart-Ache Begins To Heal I Realise Your Love Was Never Real So I Swallow My Pain , And Forget Your Name And That Fire Inside Me Starts To Burn Again
I Gave Up Trying To Ignore What You Done Sure When I Met You I Thought You Were The One And I Know Its Impossible To Turn Back Time So Instead Ill Forget You Were Ever Mine Cause You Reached Inside And Pulled My Heart Out My Chest Tore It In Two And Put The Fire To Rest
Now The Fire Burns Hot With A Raging Blue Flame And The Scars Have Healed And I’ve Forgot Your Name… ........................................................... Sorry for posting so many new lyrics in the space of two days (N)
......Andy S =) .x
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HiDee Young Andy!
Hey, Pen-Away..."When You're Hot, You're Hot" Amigo!
This'n verges on bein' Overly-Poetic/has a cliche or two (Like "Turn back time".."Pulled my heart out of my chest") and tho it ends on Singer's being "Cured" makes NO Mention of WHO's helped him Get-Over the Previous Amour.
&, while I Admire Your Hook, over-the-ages it's taken on the Spin that it's "Never-ending" FOR that Previous Amour.
So, Amigo...ya got a bit of an Uphill-Battle Still-Ahead on this one, methinks. (Let's see What Others Think...I'm just One Voice here in the wilderness!)
Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug, Stan
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thanks stan , nice to hear from you again , and i know this aint quite done yet , but im ahppy with the story , anyway thanks again
......Andy S =) .x
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