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Flavor of the day (C) Kenneth Cade, 2006 All Rights Reversed.
I hope i don't give you what I got broken mood totally distraught chokin' on my favorite food for thought give me just a little more b'cause I can't take alot tell me what's it all for because I swear I forgot can't you see the writting within the ink spots
to the aimless, nameless, tasteless, flavors of the day I hope you all get famous soon 'cause I'm ready for you all to go away
hearin' the voices again, the message never ends fell in with a bad crowd of imaginary friends compelled to solve these riddles that no one comprehends a break from this reality show, the rest of the actors still pretend count on me to be prime for numbering so factor me again at least I'm gettin' somethin' for the time that I spend
to the aimless, nameless, tasteless, flavors of the day I hope you all get famous soon cause I'm ready for you all to go away
got it all figured out but I still can't sleep keep climbin' this stairway but its gettin' to steep but i'm the king of the mountain on this here trash heap the winner of the game b'cause I'm playin' for keeps pulled myself up by my bootstraps 'cause this shits gettin' deep and I may have to learn to fly because I'll never retreat
to the aimless, nameless, tasteless, flavors of the day I hope you all get famous soon cause I'm ready for you all to go away
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Hello Kenneth
I like this song in terms of message. However just a thought - maybe it would be more interesting if you shortened it? Or is it a rap song? The rhyme scheme makes me think it would do good as rap, but you need to tell me so I understand better. Wish you all the best.
Thanks!
frankie
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Frankie .. Yeah it is hop hop.. I'm glad you like the message, it is actually pretty short time wise when rapped..
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