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http://www.songramp.com/mod/mps/viewprivtrack.php?trackid=51360something different! A Different Kind Of Lonely a thermos of white zinfandel a basket of cherries, pears and peaches a park bench, blackbirds and squirrels a little wine some fresh fruit, a heart besieges friendship, if only in solitude an old man the brim of his hat bent in the shape of a french beret seems it was time, made it look that way a blackbird on his shoulder a squirrel on his knee sometimes when a man grows older it's a different kind of lonely companionship, a helping hand a touch of love, a smile gives he calls them by name, but he won't tell it's a secret he'll keep for as long as he lives the sun is slowly setting his pals are back in the trees he'll be back tomorrow a blackbird on his shoulder a squirrel on his knee sometimes when a man grows older it's a different kind of lonely © 2007 by rittman Details:
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Hi rittman This really has a metropolitan feel and charm. I have to ask, which came first the lyric or the music? Nice collab. Feels also like there's a film out there waiting for it. good luck ! jm
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Thanks Joice
ahhh the chicken or the egg, well in rittman's world neither, huh? well I listened to Phil's instrumental, and sang a lyric I already had in my files...just call me the musical matchmaker...LOL
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The words are really well done Ritt but the music is much too Alfred Hitchcock mysterious for me. I was looking for some warm reflective render of the images through the music.
However, that's just me and one man's opinion. I do really like the whole setting and the images trhat follow.
Eric
If you're going to judge someone, do it on the side of mercy.
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Hi Eric The Snowman! Thanks!!!
Thinking it's another one of my after midnight offerrings...though writen warmly, there is a certain darkness to the scene....
rittman
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