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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/25/24 01:36 AM
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New song, not recorded yet. Let me know what you think so far. I’ll Smile At You By Norm Stinson Verse 1: Every time I look at you I feel the joy of loving you. Do you feel it too? I dance around like such a clown. Every night we paint the town. Thank God I found you. Verse 2: I climb the walls and slide back down, I look for you but you’re not found. I’ll just hang around. Then you walk in I'm blown away, I love to see you everyday.. True love will never stray Chorus You are the one, I know it’s true I shine like the sun, when I think of you. You make me smile. Smile at you I make you smile too, when I smile at you….I smile at you. Bridge I smile at you, you smile at me too.. We’re always smilin’, but we’re nobody’s fool. Verse 3: I curl my lips and smile at you, the sky reflects your eyes of blue. Baby, I love you. The sun shines down upon your hair, God has answered all my prayers. You love me too. Chorus You are the one, I know it’s true I shine like the sun, when I think of you. You make me smile. Smile at you I make you smile too, when I smile at you…. I smile at you. ------------------ Norm Stinson http://www.soundclick.com/normstinson
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just reformatting for you -------------- I’ll Smile At You By Norm Stinson Verse 1: Every time I look at you I feel the joy of loving you. Do you feel it too? I dance around like such a clown. Every night we paint the town. Thank God I found you. Verse 2: I climb the walls and slide back down, I look for you but you’re not found. I’ll just hang around. Then you walk in I'm blown away, I love to see you everyday.. True love will never stray Chorus You are the one, I know it’s true I shine like the sun, when I think of you. You make me smile. Smile at you I make you smile too, when I smile at you…. I smile at you. Bridge I smile at you, you smile at me too.. We’re always smilin’, but we’re nobody’s fool. Verse 3: I curl my lips and smile at you, the sky reflects your eyes of blue. Baby, I love you. The sun shines down upon your hair, God has answered all my prayers. You love me too. Chorus You are the one, I know it’s true I shine like the sun, when I think of you. You make me smile. Smile at you I make you smile too, when I smile at you…. I smile at you. ------------------ Norm Stinson http://www.soundclick.com/normstinson ----------------------- I think you might need some more PIZAZZ in this and "fewer" smiles"? annie
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Hi, Norm -
I'd quit smiling and smooch on her a little bit to see if she is real. You love her from afar, but to make that work there has to be some sort of dynamic tension so that the audience waits in anticipation. The old TV show "Moonlighting" did that well.
Figure out how to approach her and give her something to smile about. Maybe even grin.
Good luck with it. cue
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marveloussssssssssssssssssss job
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