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God Forsaken man Verse Avarice got the best of me. I’m a slave to desire. Its hunger is insatiable. An all-consuming fire. Verse He’s broken the bones of my faith. Gnawed away at my soul. It’s forced me down upon my knees. And picked at my bare bones Pre Chorus Life’s perils, life’s hunters Come stalk the night for me. I’m helpless, it’s hopeless. God’s turned his back on me. Chorus I’m a god forsaken man. A god forsaken man. Verse I am a raft in a vast sea. Hope cannot last for long. The sharks come when they smell the blood. They know when you’ve done wrong. Pre Chorus Life’s perils, life’s hunters Come stalk the night for me. I’m helpless, it’s hopeless. God’s turned his back on me. Chorus I’m a god forsaken man. A god forsaken man. Bridge Too late for repentance The sentence has been read. I may still be alive But I’m as good as dead.
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Hi Carroll, The first verse tells me he has forsaken God first. That is the real question here. The Bible tells us we are all redeemable if we follow His teachings. As a lyric, it reads well but I would flesh out the chorus a bit.
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I like it, it has a lot of great images in it.
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