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#1169267 - 09/16/20 03:19 PM ::The Source - a hip hop anthem ::  
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Posts: 91
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Get ready for this song; it's a whole different feeling. I like the universal meaning and I think you will too.
The song is kickass, but if you really want the feel hit that play button.
This song's a guaranteed knockout.
Btw this is about finding your purpose, not a salute to the music industry...but you'll see lmao.

click to listen. Enjoy!


V1
I feel the tug of a point in life
The best is yet to come
And despite these hard events I face
Iíve got the faith that Iíll survive
I look to see a window of time
I know I have to sink or swim
And yet my outlook is alive
Alive and kicking
Just gotta ride the waves and Iím winning

HOOK
Im out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

Im out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

V2
Iím on the quest to find my destined adventure
The source of motivation
Iím working to center
And Iím looking up all for the better
Making a footprint in the world
Where itís needed
Where we need to make a change
Where thereís a will thereís a way
So many people hope
To take the higher road
And Iím going to run a brand new course
Just the same

HOOK
Out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

Im out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

BRIDGE
I know my pathway is meant to be lived
And you canít take my passion from me
Just like when I think and breathe
Itís becoming pretty easy
Canít deny Iím cruising
Because Iím believing
If I canít reroute my life the normal way
I donít care how much effort it takes

HOOK
Out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

Im out to find the source
Where my purpose is calling
Where every motivation has a place
If youíre with me
Then take the quest
To conquer your belonging

©️l.simone


Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions.
Art is the journey of a free soul.
-Alev Oguz
http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
#1169350 - 09/19/20 01:53 PM Re: ::The Source - a hip hop anthem :: [Re: LunaSimone]  
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Luna,

This is not quite my type of music, so I canít help much in terms of feedback . . . What I did like was the backing music, definitely fits this style and would work well. Lyrically, not everything worked for me in terms of flow of thought, though thereís potential there and I like the general message. The ending of the song seemed a bit abrupt. Again, take it all with a huge boulder of salt and ďuse or lose,Ē as they say. Appreciate the effort that went into this and your sharing it with us. Stay well!

Kind regards,

Deej


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