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Blessed Be
Intro The old the sick the helpless Sometimes need a helping hand. Blessed be the ones who care And do whatever they can. Verse I want to thank the kind and caring. Take my hat off to the brave. The ones who care for other people. Who go out of their way. Chorus Blessed be, blessed be Blessed be. Verse They do for others without asking. They don’t ask for a thank you. They don’t seek headlines or attention. They just do what they do. Chorus Blessed be, blessed be Blessed be. Verse Heaven holds a place for their kindness. Their deeds don’t go unseen. God sees them helping other people. They help fulfill his dreams. Chorus Blessed be, blessed be Blessed be. Tag Blessed be the kind souls Who have a heart of gold.
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Great work and a really great subject to write about. However I would like to suggest a few changes, first changing the last two lines of the first verse. Because I think having the title in there, sounds wrong. So maybe this would work better.
So let's give praise for the ones Who do whatever they can
Then to the chorus, by including the line form taken from the verse as I think it fits so much better there. Then extending it, by including some of your tag lines and a repeat of the title part.
Like this:
Blessed be, blessed be Blessed be, blessed be the ones who care All those kind souls, with hearts of gold Blessed be, blessed be Blessed be, blessed be the ones who care
Hope you like my suggestions, if not that's fine.
I'm a lyricist with original lyrics available for all recording purposes, open to collaboration so if interested please see my website. http://www.penkslyrics.com
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I really like this Carroll,
I think it's good just as it is, but I see those are good ideas youve been given to ponder.
Geneva
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